This is a picture of Nicoletta. You can see more pictures in the following address : http://www.nicoletta.info When I saw this picture, I felt that i am the women in this picture, although I know that this sounds ridiculous. it is funny how we are from different times yet still look the same! Anyways, just wanted to say that she looks like me. I have a habit, which is to drink one glass of red Martini per day. The habit began recently, 6 months ago. three days ago, i was out with my friend D where i forgot to have my one glass of martini. the reason i forgot is because i got distracted, because we were playing games,and i was having so much fun with her that i didn't seem to care to remember to have my drink. When I saw this picture,it made me think of my habit. ----------------
sorry i didn't understand what the rest means, so i didn't correct the rest
-before writing a paragraph you have to first outline the ideas you want to include in the paragraph. -then make the ideas that you have in to sentences - each sentence has to relate to the sentence before it -stay on one subject to make the post more understandable -you have to show also for example how does this picture relate to you ----------
i only corrected some of the grammar but you need to see the grammar and how i fixed, maybe i'm not perfect but i made the post a bit better.
the sentences need to make sense so even if there are grammar mistakes you would understand it. but in this post the last piece you wrote, which is this:
" When I saw this picture and thinking about my habit, I have a idea for album I must make with "my big mouse". But it is a secret. I'm very impatient to do it and show it in here."
i didn't understand anything from it...
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try to use a word processor such as microsoft word to write the post there, print the post, let someone read it and edit the mistakes, correct the mistakes then post it on the blog.
this way, the posts would be much better in the english language
another thing you can do is to hire a teacher for one or two hours per day to teach you english tenses, verbs, subjects. and so on
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ReplyDeleteThis is a picture of Nicoletta. You can see more pictures in the following address : http://www.nicoletta.info
When I saw this picture, I felt that i am the women in this picture, although I know that this sounds ridiculous. it is funny how we are from different times yet still look the same! Anyways, just wanted to say that she looks like me.
I have a habit, which is to drink one glass of red Martini per day. The habit began recently, 6 months ago. three days ago, i was out with my friend D where i forgot to have my one glass of martini. the reason i forgot is because i got distracted, because we were playing games,and i was having so much fun with her that i didn't seem to care to remember to have my drink.
When I saw this picture,it made me think of my habit.
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sorry i didn't understand what the rest means, so i didn't correct the rest
-before writing a paragraph you have to first outline the ideas you want to include in the paragraph.
-then make the ideas that you have in to sentences
- each sentence has to relate to the sentence before it
-stay on one subject to make the post more understandable
-you have to show also for example how does this picture relate to you
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i only corrected some of the grammar but you need to see the grammar and how i fixed, maybe i'm not perfect but i made the post a bit better.
the sentences need to make sense so even if there are grammar mistakes you would understand it. but in this post the last piece you wrote, which is this:
" When I saw this picture and thinking about my habit, I have a idea for album I must make with "my big mouse". But it is a secret. I'm very impatient to do it and show it in here."
i didn't understand anything from it...
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try to use a word processor such as microsoft word to write the post there, print the post, let someone read it and edit the mistakes, correct the mistakes then post it on the blog.
this way, the posts would be much better in the english language
another thing you can do is to hire a teacher for one or two hours per day to teach you english tenses, verbs, subjects. and so on
Thanks for check it for me :) I will try again and more :)
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